News Fiona Tarr 7 months agoOctober 6, 2020

Hook Help! – Call of the Druids

I’d love some help finding the right ad copy (cool words) for some adverts I’m running on Amazon. The trouble is we only have 150 characters to work with, so I’ve cut these back as much as I can without them simply not making sense.

Seeking freedom a young Priestess escapes her betrothed. She embarks on a magical time traveling quest. Unprepared, she finds an overwhelming destiny.
A young Priestess escapes an arranged marriage to embark on a journey through time. She fights for the light, but soon discovers evil has many faces.
A young Priestess escapes an arranged marriage to embark on a magical time traveling quest. To find freedom and love, she’ll have to toughen up.
A young Priestess escapes an arranged marriage to embark on a magical time traveling quest. To find freedom and love, she’ll have to overcome evil.

Vote for your favourite in the comments below, or even have a go at writing one yourself (if you’ve read the book of course).

Fiona Tarr

24 thoughts on “Hook Help! – Call of the Druids”

Margaret Gove

July 20, 2020 8:03 am

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1. Fiona Tarr
  
  July 20, 2020 9:18 am
  
  Thanks Margaret. That’s one of our favourites too.
  
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John Barnes

July 20, 2020 8:07 am

For me it has to be option 4. It’s really the only version which would capture my initial interest in the book

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1. Fiona Tarr
  
  July 20, 2020 9:19 am
  
  Thanks John. I’m glad there was one there to capture your interest. That’s the aim.
  
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Valerie

July 20, 2020 9:35 am

#4

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1. Fiona Tarr
  
  July 20, 2020 9:38 am
  
  Thanks Valerie. I really appreciate you helping out with the choice.
  
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Kaye

July 20, 2020 9:59 am

4

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1. Fiona Tarr
  
  July 20, 2020 10:06 am
  
  Thanks Kaye. Really appreciate your time.
  
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Ronnie Burton

July 20, 2020 12:46 pm

4

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1. Fiona Tarr
  
  July 20, 2020 12:51 pm
  
  Thanks Ronnie. I’m getting a great idea of the right direction from everyone’s feedback.
  
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Lana

July 20, 2020 1:50 pm

I like 2 best.

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1. Fiona Tarr
  
  July 21, 2020 1:00 am
  
  Thanks Lana. Looks like I’ll have to run a few ads with different options.
  
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Sue

July 20, 2020 1:57 pm

2 but the wording magical time traveling quest is awkward

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1. Fiona Tarr
  
  July 21, 2020 1:01 am
  
  Thanks Sue. Yep. I’ve dropped that out of most of my recent options. This is my latest try A young Priestess is trained to fight evil. To escape an arranged marriage, she will leap through time. Adventure is assured, survival isn’t.
  
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Elizabeth Robb

July 20, 2020 2:46 pm

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1. Fiona Tarr
  
  July 21, 2020 1:02 am
  
  Thanks Elizabeth.
  
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Dianne

July 20, 2020 5:16 pm

4

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1. Fiona Tarr
  
  July 21, 2020 1:02 am
  
  Thanks Dianne. This one has had the most votes I think.
  
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Stephen Bourn

July 21, 2020 3:41 am

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1. Fiona Tarr
  
  July 21, 2020 3:54 am
  
  Thanks Stephen. I’m still plugging away at a few more. How’s your kiting going?
  
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Robbob19

July 21, 2020 6:04 pm

#2 … it’s easier to relate to overcoming evil than the fantasy of magic

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1. Fiona Tarr
  
  July 21, 2020 11:39 pm
  
  Thanks Rob. That makes sense.
  
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Jennifer H.

July 21, 2020 7:22 pm

2 or 4

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1. Fiona Tarr
  
  July 21, 2020 11:40 pm
  
  Thanks Jennifer. Everyone’s feedback has given me some direction.
  
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